okay XD so i realized i really messed up with the speech bubble, and removed a whole word >_> but at least i noticed! anyway, i decided to just resubmit the entire thing since no one commented yet or anything, i like to start fresh when i break it... and put it back on the main page after it's fixed >_> shhh...
I couldn't decide what catagory to go with, in the end, i went with comic... even though it's only one page, it does tell a tiny boring story!
so yesh! page one completed! the bubbles need help >_> my writting does too, lets hope page two speech bubbles are better *nodnod* but the coloring was pretty good i think/hope. I picked up the pace a little, and think i could color an entire page in about 8 hours now, but i guess it really depends what's on the page? so we'll see! anywho, hope someone likes it at least! they sure are cuter then i meant them to be XDD
Firen and Kyon, what are they doing to that lizard, omgwtfbbq!? havta wait for page two XÞ
omfg it's so cute XD i wanna know what happens ;o i really like your coloring XD i think it really helps to tie everything together and make it clear @w@ too cool~!
definetly comic category no question... Looks amazing, as I said before -- I have nasty word bubbles in my comic. but then again my characters use some nasty words. so I think it fits after all things are considered. but definetly pay attention to it. make it easy to read. the aim of comics is universal story telling through pictures and words. if your shits good, it doesnt matter how you word it --- I read scantillated manga with fan subs in it all the time and the combination of pics and words is absolutely haunting. I say again universal storytelling. picture this page with no words. everyone still should know whats going on. since we can all do that I think your on the right track. rock on!
thanks XDD yesh, i think the color helped alot too, i wish my lineart was good enough, but this is okay too XDD i was gonna try to get the whole page two drawn and inked today, but the whole finding a day randomly really messed me up XDD sooo, i ended up playing the new harvest moon most of the day >_< and running out for some stuff >_> but newho, thanks! XD
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Make a man a fire and he'll be warm for a day, set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
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Make a man a fire and he'll be warm for a day, set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
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I learned so much the first time I baby-sat. I couldnt just warm up any old formula. She was lack toast and tolerant.
"The proof is in the pudding. The pudding... of their DOOM!!!" >D
[07] January 2009
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Make a man a fire and he'll be warm for a day, set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
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I learned so much the first time I baby-sat. I couldnt just warm up any old formula. She was lack toast and tolerant.
"The proof is in the pudding. The pudding... of their DOOM!!!" >D
[07] January 2009
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